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israr love letter's avatar

it was so unique never read any thing like this

its was colorful and wonderful

Brok3n Engines's avatar

Thank you! I’m glad you liked it.

israr love letter's avatar

love see more whenever u come up new artical do send me

The Radical Individualist's avatar

Great imagination. What really makes this story good is that the fantasy hints at essential truth.

When we pursue an interest and become good at it, that interest can start to direct the other parts of our life.

And it doesn't hurt that it's upbeat. We need more of that in fiction/life.

Dino's avatar

I liked how Glitch slowly became part of Dasha's everyday life instead of just staying this strange thing happening to her. The friendship between the two of them was a nice touch.

ria's avatar

a very fascinating read! i love the time it must have taken to think out every detail in this complex story!

Brok3n Engines's avatar

Thank you. I am glad it interested you.

xtrole's avatar

Excellent storytelling! 💯

I’m glad that they still had positive perspectives about each other even though they ended up growing more distant after being separated by all of those miles of distance. 🙏

And Glitch was a fun character, and I’m glad that things went well with Glitch. :)