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Dino's avatar

I kept waiting to find out what he'd done, and by the end I realized it almost didn't matter. That was a cool way to tell the story.

Brok3n Engines's avatar

Yeah, it's all "Headology," as Granny Weatherwax would say.

I'm glad you appreciated it. Possibly a dog trainer would be better at this than the average person.

https://discworld.fandom.com/wiki/Esmerelda_Weatherwax#Headology

xtrole's avatar

Very tragic and heartbreaking tale. 💔

Aiden Marquis | Fantasy Writer's avatar

You do a really nice job of creating tension right off the jump and maintaining it throughout the story.