I’m loving how the story is progressing, and John’s thought process in regards to the “You’re completely right! Girls are better and more important than boys in every possible way.” part was really intriguing! ⚖️💯
i really loved the dynamic between john and the sisters in this. the moment where he realizes black Jack is not actually himself, but a separate character, felt surprisingly profound and very beautifully written.
there’s also something so charming about the world of this story - Angie and Seph learning sailing, maps, chess, and even fashion made everything feel playful and alive. and Ananta’s introduction was fantastic. she immediately feels ancient, intelligent, and emotionally real.
Apart from the writing, really dig the font choice and the use of maps. There is some old world charm here.
The story setting is so well done. Kudos to you and thank you for sharing.
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
I’m loving how the story is progressing, and John’s thought process in regards to the “You’re completely right! Girls are better and more important than boys in every possible way.” part was really intriguing! ⚖️💯
Looking forward to reading chapter 4! :D
i really loved the dynamic between john and the sisters in this. the moment where he realizes black Jack is not actually himself, but a separate character, felt surprisingly profound and very beautifully written.
there’s also something so charming about the world of this story - Angie and Seph learning sailing, maps, chess, and even fashion made everything feel playful and alive. and Ananta’s introduction was fantastic. she immediately feels ancient, intelligent, and emotionally real.
really enjoyed this, thank you! 💗
Thank you! I am glad to have written something you enjoyed.